Some personal characters I've been working on for freaking ever between more pressing projects. I want to finish these two in particular before school but I'm not sure how likely that will be..
jordan has a good point, the legs aren't turning with the pelvis (it appears). I think the bottom part of her top (shirt blouse w/e) should be twisting to reflect the movement, but very good overall!
Really nice looking characters. ;D What I'd like to see you do is try to use less to say more. It seems you throw a lot of accessories and things on a character and have them wear a hell of a lot of things that show what type of person they are. Play the hell out of other things like body type and posture to get points across instead of relying mainly on costume and accessory.
Stiff pose nukka please inject some contrapasta with some lingwini saace. trufax rofflelmaololzbewbzlolzomg no afks jkjk but seriousla you wants some BOOM headshotsULTRAKILLGODLIKE in dat hip. PROJiAM THiAT BiACON
Something about her expression and posture are contrary to the character you've laid out. seems like she could be slightly more butch. short hair, tats, piercings push that idea. she doesn't seem deadly enough
Some personal characters I've been working on for freaking ever between more pressing projects. I want to finish these two in particular before school but I'm not sure how likely that will be..
Yeah I can max.
ReplyDeleteA shame I can not produce dramatic prose here.
steven how about you post something if you want to max :P
ReplyDeletegreat job lindsey i like the colors i like how your characters are very stylish and have alot of acessories
one crit if i may add the girls waist is too twisted for her pose.. most of her body runs straight except for her waist..
jordan has a good point, the legs aren't turning with the pelvis (it appears). I think the bottom part of her top (shirt blouse w/e) should be twisting to reflect the movement, but very good overall!
ReplyDeleteReally nice looking characters. ;D
ReplyDeleteWhat I'd like to see you do is try to use less to say more. It seems you throw a lot of accessories and things on a character and have them wear a hell of a lot of things that show what type of person they are.
Play the hell out of other things like body type and posture to get points across instead of relying mainly on costume and accessory.
Stiff pose nukka please inject some contrapasta with some lingwini saace. trufax rofflelmaololzbewbzlolzomg no afks jkjk
ReplyDeletebut seriousla you wants some BOOM headshotsULTRAKILLGODLIKE in dat hip. PROJiAM THiAT BiACON
Something about her expression and posture are contrary to the character you've laid out. seems like she could be slightly more butch. short hair, tats, piercings push that idea. she doesn't seem deadly enough
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